Well okay, I can do that. But I don't need to pump my self full of pride to do this job do I? You are not more than human beings like us arn't you?
I think I deserve this position. Because I can handle criticism quite well. Also, when I am placed into stressful situations; I remain calm and seemingly unemotional on the surface.
Further critiques are welcome.
Got it. Handling criticism is a piece of it. You think you deserve it?! Why? Whats your GT and SIFT? PT score? What have you done to stand above your peers? Why should you be chosen over another 18 or 20 year old who crushed all of those things? I havent heard a single thing that makes you a great candidate except you think so. You seem un-emotional under stress? Great. Everyone responds differently to stress. My SP laughs out loud or sings under stress and hes one of the best pilots the Army has seen. So should we not pick you because you dont do that? Convince us why you should be welcomed into the corps.
You may think im being a d*ick but im really not. You can ask the members of this board whos packets ive reviewed and helped. Youve given nothing but fluff as to why you should get picked up.