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#1 Marty86

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Posted 10 March 2017 - 15:36

Hello all,

 

      I am shooting for the July board. I have a few LoR's inbound (unfortunately no SWO's) and I am chipping away at the paperwork. I have a draft of the essay and the resume I would like some feedback on.

 

     I used the format given on the sample packet on the USAREC site. It has been a bit of a head hurter. I want my essay to be unique but from my experience... follow the damn instructions. My wife is an English major so she will be hitting me up on that grammar, punctuation, etc. However, I would like some community professionals to pick apart the format and content.

 

     If anyone would be willing to take a look at the first iteration, I will PM it to you.



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Posted 13 March 2017 - 07:33

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Posted 13 March 2017 - 11:07

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