
amanzi90
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Hey guys I have the full list of civilian results. PM me your name and Ill let you know the results. I was selected! Hopefully see some of you at Basic/ WOCS! Stats: 25 out of 51 selected (49%) Average Score Stats: GT: 126 GPA (With Degrees): 3.4 SIFT: 55 APFT: 262 # with HSD: 27 # with Associates: 4 # with Bachelors: 16 # with Graduate: 4
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amanzi90 replied to amanzi90's topic in General Military Helicopter Discussions
Mike, Thank you very much for your help with this. I will revise and post a new draft. How's your application coming, what board are you aiming for? -
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amanzi90 replied to amanzi90's topic in General Military Helicopter Discussions
Hi Mike, Sorry for the late reply, I was unaware that the post was approved. I did some restructuring, but I'm still in the process of making changes especially to the second paragraph. The military has inevitably been on my mind since adolescence. I admire military history and strategy and come from a family of prior service members and civil servants. The camaraderie, loyalty, and tremendous sense of purpose that accompanies the lifestyle of a military career is extremely appealing to me. I’m able to serve my country, be part of something that’s bigger than myself, and be a good role mo -
Hello Everyone, I've been lurking on this forum for a little while and have read most of the threads I have come across regarding this topic. I was hoping you guys/girls can roast my essay/summary so I can improve it? I have used the links in regards to readability and actually watched the DoD Course on Plain Language suggested by Stearmann4. I feel like it comes across as a bit fluffy and not enough concise detail, and trying to avoid the cliche sentences is easier said than done! Let me know what you think, thank you! “Why I Want to be an Army Aviator” The military has always been on m