ggruessing Posted August 11, 2016 Report Share Posted August 11, 2016 For those that have gotten accepted, what did you talk about in your essay? Im just trying to get a feel for how the essay should be structured and flow. I was thinking: What i can bring to the army/why I would be a good fit Why I want to serve Why aviation Thanks in advance gents Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Insights_STG Posted August 12, 2016 Report Share Posted August 12, 2016 Yeah all those topics are good talking points.. Just keep in mind that pretty much everyone uses those In their letter. You want to include something that they haven't already read 100x.. I myself, devoted an entire paragraph to discuss just how "insanely hot" some of the girls that I had dated, were. there was one female officer at my board, she was the only one at the board who didn't say something nice about my letter. In summation, just start with the aforementioned topics and fill up the page. show it to your recruiter and he will give you some ideas on what to re write. Goodluck 5 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dmurray Posted August 12, 2016 Report Share Posted August 12, 2016 I myself, devoted an entire paragraph to discuss just how "insanely hot" some of the girls that I had dated, were. You always give the best advice. I'd love to read that paragraph. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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